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-<p style="margin:12px;">The quadrant method not only proves that the area of a circle is 3.2 × ( square value of the radius ), it necessarily rules out the validity of the π.
+<p style="margin:12px;">The quadrant method not only proves that the area of a circle is 3.2 × radius², it necessarily rules out the validity of the π.
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-Using the same quadrants model, in which we were able to find a direct relationship between the radius of the circle and the side length of the square that equals in area by ensuring that the overlaps equal the unfilled space, 
-and the radius of the circle equals √5 × quarter of the side, I change the side length of the square to √π, assuming that the area of a circle equals π × ( square value of the radius ). 
+Using the same quadrants model, in which we were able to find a direct relationship between the radius of the circle and the side length of the square that equals in area by ensuring that the overlaps equal the uncovered space, 
+and the radius of the circle equals √5 × quarter of the side, I change the side length of the square to √π, assuming that the area of a circle equals π × radius². 
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 Looking for the ratio between the length of the side, I could denote the side of the square as 1, and compare the radius to that, or denote the radius as 1 and express the side compared to that. 
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-I denoted the radius as 1 and the side as √π, because if the area equaled π × ( square value of the radius ), the side length of the square that has the same area as the circle was √( π × ( square value of 1 ) ). 
+I denoted the radius as 1 and the side as √π, because if the area equaled π × radius², the side length of the square that has the same area as the circle was √( π × 1² ). 
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 But the square consists of 16 right triangles with legs of a quarter side and a half side, and hypotenuse of √π × √5 divided by 4 ( about 0.991 ), which should equal the radius.
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 This means that the radius is shorter than it should logically be ( one ). 
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-That is a logical error in the " Area = π × ( square value of the radius ) " formula; not in the model.
+That is a logical error in the " Area = π × radius² " formula; not in the model.
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 The π is a very rough approximation; 3.2 is an exact value.