From 1f44cd608903b12834ffa6a9fb5c2ad01622d983 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: markxiaotao Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2020 16:06:04 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 01/10] Negative word for Ikegami-san --- Abstract.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Abstract.md b/Abstract.md index 6df33fc..7d76503 100644 --- a/Abstract.md +++ b/Abstract.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -NAIST is a very ... place to study ... +NAIST is a very sad place to study ... It is well-established that .... This study aims to determine how .... Specifically, it investigates whether ... From 9181769e461ae7d0b7c57bbb3d0c29643f0ddd5b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "T.S" Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2020 16:12:43 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 02/10] add positive word --- Abstract.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Abstract.md b/Abstract.md index 6df33fc..39fedb4 100644 --- a/Abstract.md +++ b/Abstract.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -NAIST is a very ... place to study ... +NAIST is a very good place to study ... It is well-established that .... This study aims to determine how .... Specifically, it investigates whether ... From 2e1e1399ebf5fd78fe1dcf912e75721de570f940 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: NoppadolAssava Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2020 16:19:55 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 03/10] Update Abstract.md Very positive sentiment for you :D --- Abstract.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Abstract.md b/Abstract.md index 6df33fc..596f4d8 100644 --- a/Abstract.md +++ b/Abstract.md @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ It is well-established that .... This study aims to determine how .... Specifica To test the hypothesis ... we performed a .... We conduct... -Results were analyzed using ... The results showed a small effect .... +Results were analyzed using a very good analytical technique. We very proud of this technique. The results showed a small effect .... These results suggest that ... We recommend that .... That is why NAIST is very ... to study... From f30c83c1f193b845543806920282fd66bcc6b830 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "T.S" Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2020 16:22:12 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 04/10] add negative (hopefully) test --- Abstract.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Abstract.md b/Abstract.md index b98ec8a..73ec2bb 100644 --- a/Abstract.md +++ b/Abstract.md @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ It is well-established that .... This study aims to determine how .... Specifica To test the hypothesis ... we performed a .... -We conduct... +We conduct assgnment stress test Results were analyzed using a very good analytical technique. We very proud of this technique. The results showed a small effect .... From f6390497f67826d886f760538c996cf80a8ed7cd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Vittunyuta Maeprasart Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2020 16:23:47 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 05/10] Update Abstract.md add positive --- Abstract.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Abstract.md b/Abstract.md index b98ec8a..db7bf7c 100644 --- a/Abstract.md +++ b/Abstract.md @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@ NAIST is a very sad place to study ... It is well-established that .... This study aims to determine how .... Specifically, it investigates whether ... -To test the hypothesis ... we performed a .... +To test the hypothesis ... we performed a high-quality questionnaire. We conduct... Results were analyzed using a very good analytical technique. We very proud of this technique. The results showed a small effect .... From 478ab1724627608db5480287deb58b04186e38b3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: 315haoge <1452766901@qq.com> Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2020 16:26:27 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 06/10] Update Abstract.md --- Abstract.md | 4 ++++ 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+) diff --git a/Abstract.md b/Abstract.md index b98ec8a..aa95d23 100644 --- a/Abstract.md +++ b/Abstract.md @@ -8,3 +8,7 @@ Results were analyzed using a very good analytical technique. We very proud of t These results suggest that ... We recommend that .... That is why NAIST is very ... to study... +--- +NAIST is a very good place to study. It is well-established that it is a good place to study. This study aims to determine how to study well at NAIST. Specifically, it investigates whether you have a good motivation. +To test the hypothesis, we performed a good lecture. We conduct many interesting activities. Results were analyzed using many methods. The results showed a small effect that everyone want to study well at here. +These results suggest that we both want to study well at NAIST. We recommend that everyone should perform well. That is why NAIST is very good to study. From b0a9e9936fccd2c000e5b49b00ca85fd3c676bb3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tattiya Sakulniwat <46751639+tattiyaS@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2020 16:31:12 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 07/10] Negative words sounds a little bit sarcasm though XD --- Abstract.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Abstract.md b/Abstract.md index b98ec8a..fc60fa9 100644 --- a/Abstract.md +++ b/Abstract.md @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@ NAIST is a very sad place to study ... -It is well-established that .... This study aims to determine how .... Specifically, it investigates whether ... +It is well-established that the students do not want to study anymore. This study aims to determine how .... Specifically, it investigates whether ... To test the hypothesis ... we performed a .... From 439ab018273ab0a7fb1aa7e48c58ea78e678ffd7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Christopher Wiraatmaja Date: Wed, 2 Dec 2020 22:04:24 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 08/10] Add "These result suggest ... " to the Abstract Full sentence: These results suggest that NAIST is indeed a well-established tier 1 place to study. --- Abstract.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Abstract.md b/Abstract.md index 7d85b1d..7f96c5d 100644 --- a/Abstract.md +++ b/Abstract.md @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ We conduct assgnment stress test Results were analyzed using a very good analytical technique. We very proud of this technique. The results showed a small effect .... -These results suggest that ... We recommend that .... That is why NAIST is very ... to study... +These results suggest that NAIST is indeed a well-established tier 1 place to study. We recommend that .... That is why NAIST is very ... to study... NAIST is a very good place to study. It is well-established that it is a good place to study. This study aims to determine how to study well at NAIST. Specifically, it investigates whether you have a good motivation. To test the hypothesis, we performed a good lecture. We conduct many interesting activities. Results were analyzed using many methods. The results showed a small effect that everyone want to study well at here. These results suggest that we both want to study well at NAIST. We recommend that everyone should perform well. That is why NAIST is very good to study. From 6944612c98a3a3597c0bd3ec4f9f35817204f801 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Vittunyuta Maeprasart Date: Thu, 3 Dec 2020 15:36:11 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 09/10] Update Abstract.md Edit almost all --- Abstract.md | 14 +++----------- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/Abstract.md b/Abstract.md index 7f96c5d..60ab9d0 100644 --- a/Abstract.md +++ b/Abstract.md @@ -1,15 +1,7 @@ - -NAIST is a very good place to study ... - -It is well-established that the students do not want to study anymore. This study aims to determine how .... Specifically, it investigates whether ... - +NAIST is a very good place to study. It is well-established that the students do not want to study anymore. This study aims to determine how to study well at NAIST. Specifically, it investigates whether NAIST students can in fact enjoy themselves in the middle of nowhere in Nara. To test the hypothesis ... we performed a high-quality questionnaire. We conduct assgnment stress test -Results were analyzed using a very good analytical technique. We very proud of this technique. The results showed a small effect .... - +Results were analyzed using a very good analytical technique. We very proud of this technique. The results showed a small effect that everyone want to study well at here. -These results suggest that NAIST is indeed a well-established tier 1 place to study. We recommend that .... That is why NAIST is very ... to study... -NAIST is a very good place to study. It is well-established that it is a good place to study. This study aims to determine how to study well at NAIST. Specifically, it investigates whether you have a good motivation. -To test the hypothesis, we performed a good lecture. We conduct many interesting activities. Results were analyzed using many methods. The results showed a small effect that everyone want to study well at here. -These results suggest that we both want to study well at NAIST. We recommend that everyone should perform well. That is why NAIST is very good to study. +These results suggest that NAIST is indeed a well-established tier 1 place to study. We recommend that everyone should perform well. That is why NAIST is very prefect place to study. From abf7a3596b62a4691a27aa89f3a3394822858b1a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: kiyoka-i <61221166+kiyoka-i@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Thu, 3 Dec 2020 15:47:42 +0900 Subject: [PATCH 10/10] Update Abstract.md --- Abstract.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Abstract.md b/Abstract.md index 60ab9d0..d8c6609 100644 --- a/Abstract.md +++ b/Abstract.md @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ NAIST is a very good place to study. It is well-established that the students do not want to study anymore. This study aims to determine how to study well at NAIST. Specifically, it investigates whether NAIST students can in fact enjoy themselves in the middle of nowhere in Nara. -To test the hypothesis ... we performed a high-quality questionnaire. +To test the hypothesis I had established, we performed a high-quality questionnaire. We conduct assgnment stress test Results were analyzed using a very good analytical technique. We very proud of this technique. The results showed a small effect that everyone want to study well at here.