diff --git a/charter/dawn-charter-02.md b/charter/dawn-charter-02.md
index 52e140b..62a5c78 100644
--- a/charter/dawn-charter-02.md
+++ b/charter/dawn-charter-02.md
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ Entities may be tasks, workloads, endpoints, services, AI agents, etc.
 
 The principle use case of this working group will be focusing on how
 an AI agent can find another AI agent with specific capabilities, or
-how a workload orchestrator can to locate compute resources in a
+how a workload orchestrator can locate compute resources in a
 particular jurisdiction, or how a service consumer can discover
 providers that support a required protocol version.  In each case, an
 entity needs knowledge of any other entity's specific properties
@@ -24,12 +24,12 @@ To support these goals, an interoperable and generic discovery
 mechanism is needed that builds on existing protocols and tools,
 benefits from established trust models, supports proven delegation and
 federation architectures, and allows organisations to independently
-publish discovery information.
+publish and manage discovery information.
 
 ## Scope
 
 Discovery in the DAWN context is limited to being able to "find me an
-entity to talk to" within collaborating organizations.  This includes
+entity to interact with" within collaborating organizations.  This includes
 communication about the following attributes:
 
 - What is the entity's type and classification?
@@ -41,9 +41,10 @@ communication about the following attributes:
 
 Where possible, any solutions work will be built in a modular way
 using existing IETF protocols that provide support for any needed
-communication, authentication and privacy. The WG will consider the
-DNS as a likely initial protocol upon which to build a discovery
-protocol.
+communication, authentication and privacy. The WG will consider existing 
+IETF solutions, such as DNS, or solutions porposed under other organizations
+(e.g., Linux foundation) that address DAWN problem space as initial starting 
+point upon which discovery protocols would be built. 
 
 Although initially focused on discovery of AI agents, agentic tools,
 and agentic skills, the WG is
@@ -84,7 +85,7 @@ roughly in this order:
 
 The DAWN working group will seek to coordinate with other WGs and
 external standards bodies as necessary.  These may include WIMSE,
-CORE, CATS, ITU-T SG17, 3GPP, and the Linux Foundation.
+CORE, CATS, DNS-related WGs, ITU-T SG17, 3GPP, and the Linux Foundation.
 
 ## Milestones