Update page.js

Author: vensah-dev

app/page.js

@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ export default function Home() {
   ]
   const year2020 = [
     {
-      text: `This was the year I did what all computer enthusiasts do — take apart their very first computer. I took apart a Dell XPS M1330 (from 2008 ☠️) and learned how computer hardware works to repair the computer right before COVID-19. After a clean install of Ubuntu 18.04LTS I was able to use the computer
+      text: `This was the year I did what all computer enthusiasts do — take apart their very first computer. I took apart a Dell XPS M1330 (from 2008 ☠️) and learned how computer hardware works to repair the computer right before COVID-19. After a clean install of Ubuntu 18.04 LTS I was able to use the computer
       for my HBL.`,
 
       image: DellXPSM1330,
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ export default function Home() {
   ]
   const year2022 = [
     {
-      text: `For someone who lost 11 umbrellas by forgetting where I put it (and 3 more due to collateral damage), I performed just as you would expect for my Sec 1 History. Other than that I also managed to clench 1st placing in 3 categories in my very first RoboCup competition.`,
+      text: `I managed to clench 1st placing in 3 categories in my very first RoboCup competition.`,
 
       image: Trophyx3,
     },
@@ -98,15 +98,14 @@ export default function Home() {
   ]
   const year2023 = [
     {
-      text: `The fact that it was streaming year and I should start to lock in to save my grades took me 2 terms to realise this year. 
-      I also made more achievements in my CCA by winning NRC and managed to contribute more to my CCA by becoming an Exco.
+      text: `I also made more achievements in my CCA by winning NRC and managed to contribute more to my CCA by becoming an Exco.
       I was also part of the Swift Accelerator Programme which enabled me to create and release an app in the App Store.`,
 
       image: SmartSheet,
     },
     {
-      text: `I also made more achievements in my CCA by winning NRC and managed to contribute more to my CCA by becoming an Exco. 
-      My NRC project also gave me the opportunity to give a presentation about it during the STEM ALP Fest 2023.`,
+      text: `I managed to contribute more to my CCA by becoming one of the three sec 2 Excos. By winning NRC,
+      I was given the opportunity to give a presentation at Temasek Poly about it during the STEM ALP Fest 2023.`,
 
       image: StemAlpFest,
     },