chore(v1.42): copy pass on About + Privacy + Terms#55
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Removes em-dashes, contrast-pattern AI tells ("not X, it's Y"),
quadruple-anaphora chains ("Don't X. Don't Y. Don't Z. Don't W."),
and hedge phrases ("we'll do our best") across all four prose
surfaces shipped with v1.42. About also gets the contact mailto it
was missing (was "send a note" with no target). All 213 tests still
pass; legal.test.tsx assertions on third-party names, refund
language, jurisdiction, and the /pricing link were preserved
verbatim during the rewrite.
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.7 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
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Summary
Cleans up AI-pattern tells across all four v1.42 prose surfaces (Privacy, Terms, About, ROADMAP rows) found during the post-merge copy review.
What was scrubbed
<strong>Stripe:</strong> ...); sentence-internal em-dashes became periods, commas, or were removed.Bonus fix
About had "send a note" with no contact target. Now links
hello@palouselabs.com(the same address Privacy/Terms/Footer use).Test plan
npm test— 213/213 still passing.legal.test.tsxassertions on third-party names (Supabase/Stripe/PostHog/Mapbox/Visual Crossing/Cloudflare), "within 30 days of charge", "State of Washington", and the /pricing link were all preserved verbatim during the rewrite.grep -E "—|–|—|–"returns nothing in any of the four files.Out of scope
Pre-existing em-dashes elsewhere in
App.tsx,Pricing.tsx, and historical ROADMAP entries weren't touched. This PR is bounded to the v1.42 surfaces.🤖 Generated with Claude Code