Катюшкина Настя#10
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Toouren
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Apr 14, 2021
| export class MoneyRepository { | ||
| private _repository: any; | ||
| constructor(initialRepository: any) { | ||
| private _repository: Array<object>; |
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Object в типизации - страшный грех, также как и any
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Для обхода массива следует использовать методы массива
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| if (i['moneyInfo']['currency']===currency && copy >= i['count'] && (rub.includes(i['count']) || doll.includes(i['count']))) |
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Обращаться к объекту через скобки и строчную нотацию следует только в одном случае - когда название поля состоит из нескольких слова, но это полная жесть и так никто не делает
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| return copy === 0; | ||
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| public money (a: IMoneyUnit, b: IMoneyUnit): number |
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| public authorize(userId: any, cardId: any, cardPin: any): any { | ||
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| public authorize(userId: string, cardId: string, cardPin: string): boolean |
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Этот метод всегда возвращает false
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| return this.registerForUserNewCard(argsForChangeFunction); | ||
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| moneyInfo: | ||
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| denomination: (+moneyUnit.moneyInfo.denomination * c).toString(), |
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Неявное преобразование - зло
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| for (const moneyUnit of moneyUnits) | ||
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| const factor = this._currentCard.currency === moneyUnit.moneyInfo.currency ? 1 : (this._currentCard.currency === Currency.RUB ? 70 : (1 / 70)) |
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Опять мясо, нужно разбивать такое на более простую логику
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Пока 3 балла только за одну задачу, за все остальные 0
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May 26, 2021
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+8 баллов |
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